Ok i've run this rough draft together fairly quickly. I'm not sure if i've missed anything out or have waffled too much anywhere, if anyone has any improvements/amendments i'd be happy to listen!
The defendants wish to defend the claim issued by the claimant for the following reasons:
1) The defendants alledge that the car (Peugeot 406, R901 KWY, later changed to R8 BDM) was in an unsatisfactory condition when sold, having copies of many complaint letters sent to the claimant. The defendants also had to pay £214.57 for repairs to the car within 1 month of purchasing it. The car had a dangerous fault which caused the engine to cut out and therefore also causing the car to lose power steering and proper use of the brakes. the claimant and the garage the car was bought from refused to fix the car under warranty.
2) the Defendants sent a letter on the 04/03/2004 which stated they wanted to return the car due to the unsatisfactory condition it was in and the number of faults it had, including faulty lights, faulty exhaust, peeling laquer and unusual noises coming from the car. The claimant then agreed the garage the car was obtained from would examine the car. Some of the faults on the car were then fixed but the car continued to have electronic faults for the whole of the defendants ownership. Due to one of the defendants (Mr Mitchell) being disabled and also suffering from anxiety and depression the defendants gave up complaining to the claimant about the car as it was causing Mr Mitchell undue stress.
3) On the 11th April 2006 the defendants wrote to the claimant asking for a settlement figure on the account. The settlement figure was significantly higher than the defendants were expecting, having just remortgaged their house the defendants onlly had £2500 to settle the account. The claimants requested a figure of £3524.81, which the defendants could not afford. The defendants were unaware that any settlement figure would be calculated using the rule of 78, had they been they would not have entered into the contract in the first place.
4) The defendants dispute that the claimant had the right to terminate the agreement, due to the fact the defendants had already paid over half the total amount owed on the agreement and had already exercised their right to voluntary terminate under the terms of the agreement.
5) It is not disputed that the defendants were in arrears at the time they issued the Voluntary Termination letter. However the defendants do dispute the amount the claimant said was needed to exercise this right. In a letter dated 8th June 2006 the amount the claimant stated that needed to be paid in order to terminate the agreement was £527.64. However only £422.64 of this amount was made up of arrears. The remaining £105 constituted three £35 penalties for issuing a letter each time a payment was missed on the account. The defendant disputes these £35 charges as they do not represent a genuine pre-estimate of loss and therefore are an unenforceable penalty under the Unfair Terms Consumer Contracts Regulations 1999 and the Unfair Contract Terms Act 1977. The same letter also stated that the balance of any insurances would remain payable after the contract was terminated.
6) The defendants made an offer of £300 to settle the account which was refused by the claimant.
7) On the 8th June 2006 the defendants received another letter from the claimant stating the amount required to terminate the agreement was £918.72.

On the 5th July 2006 the defendants received another letter from the claimant stating the amount required to terminate the agreement was £728.52.
9) On the 31st July 2006 the defendants received another letter from the claimant containing the following statement: "If we recover the car under a voluntary termination, you will have to pay both the arrears on the vehicle and the balance of any outstanding insurances currently these stand at £1107.81"
10) In an earlier letter of the 8th June (the same letter referred to in para. 2 above) the claimant wrote "Other insurances taken out at the same time will remain payable. To settle these insurances and claim any rebate which you are entitled you may also choose to pay the amount set out below". It is no wonder the defendants were confused as to what amounts they owed or had to pay to terminate the agreement when the claimant didn't seem to know either and the amounts rose and fell with each letter.
11) On the 14th August 2006 the defendants received a notice of default.
12) On the 06 September 2006 the defendants received notice that the claimant was terminating the contract. This letter also stated that the goods were no longer in the defendants possession with the claimants consent and they must be made available for collection or the claimant would apply to the court for their return. The defendants replied to this notice, stating that the car had been available for collection since the claimant received the Voluntary Termination notice around the beginning of June 2006. The defendants had made this fact clear in several letters to the claimant.
13) The defendants made arrangements for an agent acting on behalf of the claimant to collect the car, which the agent duly did. The defendants left upgraded alloy wheels worth £980 on the car for which they have the receipt, and also a personal number plate that cost a further £250, again the receipt is available. Photographic evidence that these items were on the car when the agent collected it is available.
14) No court order was obtained by the claimant and the car was returned with the full consent of the defendants. Therefore the defendants claim that this was a Voluntary Termination and not a repossession.
15) The claimants have entered a court claim for the full amount remaining under the agreement, yet they have also received the car back. The defendants would like to request details of what exactly has happened to the car.
16) The car had been unused, untaxed, uninsured and a SORN off road declaration made since the defendants sent the notice of Voluntary Termination at the beginning of June 2006.
17) The defendants requested information about their account via a Subject Access Request. With the information that came with this request was a valuation the claimant obtained when the car was bought by the defendants. This valuation was £3908. The defendants paid £5310 for the car, believing that a car dealer would sell a car for a price it was worth. One of the defendants (Mr Mitchell) is also disabled and needs dependable transport, and the defendants traded both their old cars in when purchasing this car believing they were buying a more reliable car.
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The defendants were baffled by the constantly changing amounts that the claimant alledged needed to be paid in order to terminate the contract. The amount rose one month then fell the next, then rose again. Then according to the claimants letters the gap insurances had to be paid in order to terminate the contract, then they didn't, then they did again. How were the defendants ever to know exactly how the claimants were calculating their settlement figures?
19) The defendants therefore claim that they Voluntary Terminated the account under the terms of their contract. The defendants admit that they owe £422.64 in arrears up until the date of the Voluntary Termination and dispute the remaining amount of the claim.
Any good?