Cpr 16.4(1)

Hi i`ve just opened a letter from my CC and the judge states that the claim be stayed as it makes no serious attempt to comply with CPR16.4(1) by setting out a concise statement of the facts.(stylised particulars do not constitute compliance.) The claimant must amend or substitute the particulars of the claim by setting out the case and by including details of the charges complained of, how they are calculated and in what circumstances they wer incurred. The claimant should note that sending copy correspondence and/or copies of bank statements will not suffice.( I sent a speadsheet with all the charges along with the aq, can anyone please tell me what she means and what she`s looking for.Also what does she mean by a concise statement of the facts, how the charges are calculated.) Im going round in circles and feel like folding.

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