I have used a template letter, which includes the "default removal" issues. You used to be able to fnd it in the Templates Library- but for some reason the paragraph about the deafult removal was removed.
Anyway, this is my POC:
I am claiming the return of money taken by
the defendant in the way of charges over
the last year plus interest under s69 of
the County Courts Act 1984 at the rate of
8% a year from xxx to xxxx of
£xxx. The charges are a disproportionate
penalty and are unenforceable as they are
contrary to common law. Further, as a
disproportionate penalty they are invalid
under the Unfair (Contracts) Terms Act 1977
s.4 and under the Unfair Terms in Consumer
Contracts Regulations 1999. Para.8 and sch.2
(1)(e).In the event that the charges aren't
a penalty then they are unreasonable within
the meaning of the Supply of Goods and
Services Act 1982 s.15.I repeatedly asked
the bank to justify their charges but they
have declined to do so.The defendant has also
entered a default notice against my credit
record. This default occurred because of
unlawful charges levied by the defendant.I
require that the defendant removes the
default entry from the register.
Perhaps a moderator could explain why no references to defaults in the templates anymore? Why is it still here:
3. Letter before action - Consumer version - asking for it back
but not here:
5. Money Claim On-Line (MCOL) Particulars of Claim
or here:
4. Particulars of claim - N1 - updated version now available